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The Outback

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:iconabsumoaevum2:
~absumoaevum2 Jun 15, 2009, 6:51:22 AM
Very nice shot.

A couple of things:
I have mixed feelings about the electric wires in the background. They match perfectly with the model's upper body slant, but they also seem to ruin the rural idea of the picture. If you're going for rural with a hint of modern industrialism, however, don't change a thing.

I'm not a fan of the bud in her armpit.

I love the colors. Really muted, and the purple against the tan and with the blue sky is very pretty.

I like that vest with the jeans and sunglasses very much. I think that shirt could really be any flattering color and probably go well in that outfit.

Thanks for humoring me!
<3

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Dulce et decorum est pro patria mori.

Bullshit.
:iconsebastianhundt:
~SebastianHundt Jun 15, 2009, 7:00:11 AM
Hi there ;)

first of all, you`re right. perhaps i should have called it suburban outback or sth. like that ;) sounds better ?

and furthermore to your armpit request...
indeed, this is not perfect, but what would you do if no other picture is in place AND especially what to do if you take things, as they are ? ;)

Thx a lot for your time devastating analysis ^^
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~absumoaevum2 Jun 15, 2009, 7:11:49 AM
Devastating analysis? Haha... I hope not. I meant most of it as a compliment and the rest as constructive criticism. I didn't mean to be harsh or anything...

Suburban Outback is a nice play with images.
Modern Rural or Modern Outback works too.
What are you trying to portray with the clothing? Let that be the basis for your titles and your settings, I think.

I don't know what to do about the armpit... As they are... Why take things as they are if you can make them better?

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Dulce et decorum est pro patria mori.

Bullshit.
:iconsebastianhundt:
~SebastianHundt Jun 15, 2009, 7:17:32 AM
That`s not the thing i ment ;) I just wanted to thank you for the plenty of time taken to analyse the image :)

And yes...why take them as they are ?! Perhaps I`m not interested in faking every detail in an image. I`m more interested in taking sceneries as they are...conclusion for next image: Have a closer look on details ;)
:iconabsumoaevum2:
~absumoaevum2 Jun 15, 2009, 7:24:14 AM
There we go. That's all I'm saying. Details are very important, to me at least. :)

Ok, well have fun!

--
Dulce et decorum est pro patria mori.

Bullshit.
:iconsebastianhundt:
~SebastianHundt Jun 15, 2009, 10:03:29 AM
Details are the most powerful parts in images...
they can both: enhance and destroy images within seconds ;)

Same 2 you, enjoy :)
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